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How’s this poem I just wrote? It’s called Rose Liquid?

6 Comments 27 March 2010

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is this a good song that I wrote? my 1st one!?

5 Comments 26 March 2010


~She doesn’t piss she tinkles~ [song title]

you wanted the pretty
you wanted the witty
but it wasn’t workin out for you
you wanted the perfect,
the oral-bright smile,
not the one who cries
every once in a while. . . .
[yeah. ]
[a-yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah yeah. . ]
you wanted her but,
you said you loved me
i know the truth and so it’s comin out
[yeah, yeah]
cuz she’s, cuz she’s
she’s everything I’m not
[she's everything im not, she's everything you want, she always hits the spot, yeah yeah]
theres nothin else that can go wrong
all my sorrows of you are
in this song, oh yeahh, cuz im tired of the nothing thats left. . . of the man i always thought
was the best, but. . .
you wanted her but,
you said you loved me
i know the truth and so it’s comin out
[yeah, yeah]
cuz she’s, cuz she’s
she’s everything I’m not
[she's everything im not, she's everything you want, she always hits the spot, yeah yeah] x2
cuz she’s. . . cuz she’s. . . she every-thing im not. . .
[she's everything im not, she's everything you want, she always hits the spot, yeah yeah]
anyone know how to put it onto youtube? as soon as i figure out how to work it with my guitar, it’ll be on there hopefully. . .

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I wrote a follow on from breaking dawn a fanfic can you plz express what you think of it??? Thankyou?

2 Comments 25 March 2010

PREFACE

Death- death was someone or something that hunted me. I had stared into the hollow eyes of death more than I should have. But each time I had walked into death I had walked out of it. Surely this was not where I was going to die?
Was this the feeling you got when you knew you were going to die. What was dying to the undead? Instead of imprisonment was it a journey?
Surely this was not the worst place to die. I had all the people I loved. All my family. I had everyone. If I was going to die it would be in a noble manner. With the ones I loved.
I knew death was coming and I knew I could run. Far away from all of this. But how could you run when you would endanger, hurt someone you loved so much. Loved with all you heart, yet were not able to save. How could you hurt them?
This was the end, or was it?
As thoughts of love and death ran through my head a mysterious darkness rolled out from the forest line.

1

MOONLIT SKY

New Day

The clouds gave way in the north. I looked up adverting my gaze from the rest of my family.
Twilight.
A flash back took me to the dim human memory of Edward standing in my shabby old room. The end of the day, yet I had forever in my dream place with Edward. And forever was the only amount of time I was going to settle for.
I sighed with uncertain emotion. A long time had past. Though Charlie hair glinted with silver I remained the same as ever. Eighteen forever, it seemed like a perfect fairytale with Edward as prince. But no matter how much I tried to reason with myself I felt twinge of regret. I knew one day I would lose Charlie. It was not just Charlie I would lose. All of my friends, everyone.
Without much effort I lifted myself up from the mat where the rest of my family sat. I glanced at the rest of my family bathing in the precious sun. There skin glittered like a million diamonds. The sight of Edward’s dazzling face hit me harder than the day in the meadow. Yet this time I was not scared. Instead I was completely lost in this face. I stared down to his face with slight resentment of his beauty.
I knew that my perfect body matched perfectly with his. My body, the phrase seemed utterly wrong. I still could not get used to my body. For so long I had been the average person. Not shining in anyway. Then suddenly I became this beautiful person. I was starting to think that the body was not for me.
With slight reluctance I started walking in the direction of Jacob and Renesmee. The white sand grains rubbed under my feet and the long narrow strip of beach was now shining under the beautiful sunset. In a blurred action Edward was right next to me. His hand felt warm in mine. I looked up to his face to his golden eyes looking down on me. Embarrassed I looked away staring at the foam in the sea.
Edward’s warm hand brushed upon my chin lifting my face to his gently. His warm eyes clouded me in love. His silky skin caressed my cheek and his honey sweet breath trickled over to me. I lifted my lips to touch his.
Slowly I lifted my lips off his and walked again to Renesmee.
If my heart was still beating it would have been pounding. I looked up to him and he smiled down on me. All my stress lifted from me and I grinned sheepishly at him. The sky was painted in unearthly underwater blue ranging across all shades.
2
MOONLIT SKY

Jacob and Renesmee were playing in the warm sea. The smell of salt drifted all over the beach. The pulsing of Jacob’s and Renesmee’s heart echoed on the rocks simultaneously.
Jacob ducked under the water lifting Renesmee up out of the foam onto to his shoulders. Renesmee ringing laughter resounded and she giggled girlishly. Jacob’s rough black hair was in an army haircut it was like little thorns spiking up in every direction. Renesmee hair was soaked and the illuminating sky made her curly bronze hair shine. Her warm brown eyes clouded with adoration for her young love.
She was beautiful and she deserved all the love that Jacob could give her. Yet even in happiness I couldn’t feel paranoid about the fact that one day Jacob would die. Renesmee would lose her love forever. How could she ever survive that?
So many times I had put my own life on the line for Edward. I knew that life without him would be no life at all. She would not be able to deal with all that grief. She loved Jacob like I loved Edward yet she would be hurt if she loved him anymore.
I rocked on my heels coming to a standstill. The movement was done in one second. Time was nothing to me and Edward but for Renesmee. I rested my head against Edward’s chest. Warmth radiated through the thin material of his tight top. His muscles on his arms rippled beautifully as his arms wrapped around me. He lifted my chin up and kissed me tenderly.
A distressed cough interrupted our moment of passion. Jacob now stood right beh

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What do you think of this poem I wrote?

13 Comments 24 March 2010


Childhood Memories

I remember the sun,
When it used to shine so bright.
I remember long ago,
When there was no such thing as night.
I remember as a child,
When friends weren’t hard to find.
When every face held a smile,
When everyone was kind.
I remember playing in
The worlds we used to make.
The joy that they would give us,
The tears that they would take.
I remember sunny times,
When outside we wouild play.
I remember rainy days,
When inside we would stay.
I remember passing time,
With boards and cards and dice.
I remember cardboard boxes;
A child’s paradice.
I remember lullibies,
And stories that they told.
I remember how it felt, to wake up in their hold.
But friends have left,
And time has gone.
Some have died,
And life moves on.
So I’ll live in the present,
And remember the past.
I’ll look foward to the future,
And make sure life dosn’t move so fast.

I know it has some gramatical errors, and I’m only 14, so it probably wont be that great.

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What do you think of this part of the story I wrote?

5 Comments 23 March 2010

3. E ‘was the first day of the third year of Valla in high school. Been moved into the school parking lot while Valla is disappointed, which would bring this year. It seemed that, in its absence, the school started to go under construction, so that the car park into a complete disaster. It was destroyed patches of asphalt ripped out of place and boards of bar ovunque.Valla pulled his car around in a hurry, did not want to search for a parking lot and walked to his car to establish its headquarters on the street the school principal. When she out of the car he noticed his car has two lanes. Although she realized that she did not revise it, and they continuously go to school at the beginning of his time. € Noise. What was with all this buzz? It is a wake-up calls you to awaken. Dannazione.Robert beat them all rolled into her room and then out of bed. He went straight to the toilet and after treatment than the usual activities of the morning, urinate, brush your teeth, and dressing, you could see in the mirror. He only saw his face, but tried to look over when we think he called him really looking era.Tutti ice. He had the nickname, earned mainly because of its snow-white hair and very blue eyes. When he saw that the ice has shown, “” a part of him. If you deeper, thought of all the moments in which the girl was crying and said that he was really cold as ice. He had always thought that these girls are nice to at first, but then heard nothing for them and for some it was a bit “to his nickname crudele.Sorrise think he liked best, then he said to himself: “Yes, I’m cold as ice. “pulled out his leather jacket and grabbed the keys for Robert, no, Ice head out the door. He went to his truck with a roar and a cry was in high school for his final year. € Valla had addressed some shops do what they felt was the beginning of the year to do. They had to know a program during the summer so that students that their classes and teachers for the new semester in that direction, Valla was deliberately sent in its class. Trat in the office and walked directly on the desk of the country. “What happened to Mr. Larson?” She asked him to Jet. Mr. Larson was the teacher of social studies and Valla was really pleased. He inspired so many things for them and taught them that the remark by one very important thing in life was. Was the only person who felt that everyone he could speak and be understood. “Well, that’s not here any more lessons.” Principal Harper said. Valla thought his answer was not vague. She had never liked him how a person he was very tall and pointed, and had always seemed to her that he loved nothing more than they hear. “I realized that a great deal from. I really want to know why there are more lessons here. “Valla, he said, trying to be patient with this pompous man.” Well, I do not think you or connect with other students of the economy, in the privacy of your teacher. Let me tell you, of course, but it is my duty as I am in charge here, to ensure the control and for students of the faculty. Well, why do not you go further than a good student and is ready for the class I am sure that new teachers are equally beautiful as Mr. Larson was. “Mr. Harper detto.Valla was afraid he’d never been so close before he could begin talking to her again, he just decided it was best to leave. €” Steven, get up, we’re late for school! ” yelled Doug, Brother Stevens, the elderly. At a time when Steven bolted to the sounds of late and jumped out of bed. In its race leg Tangled Up in his papers and walked precipitately. Steven pulled the same free and pulled a pair of jeans was located at approximately the same shape as pavimento.Doug Steven was had just woke up one minute before him. He recalled his alarm setting, but it seemed that he was not able to go all around her insieme.Entrambi house to collect clothes to wear and comb his hair. Doug rushed out the door earlier and Steven followed, so shut the screen door behind him, drawing on both their backpacks when Doug had forgotten. Doug was pulling a way to go before he even got Steven all the way into the car. When he went directly into the car, closed the door and threw accelerated their luggage in the back seat, Doug scuola.Questa against only a small part of my story is growing. And “just for fum. and it is the people and how they think they see things about people. And most of the time they are wrong.

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I WROTE A NOVEL I’M ONLY 14?

8 Comments 23 March 2010

hi! i wrote a novelette it contains 7,896 words
this is just the first page but the rest is amazing. . i wrote about 19 pages. . how much do i need?? i will be finished by 25 can i get it published?? i want to gt about 10-14 thousand words but i care about the quality rather than words. .

I acted like I didn’t know the man, but I did. I had known him from my dreams, my nightmares, but not real life. I had been searching for him 3 decades, and now I had found him. I was in the grocery store picking out some oranges for Kendra, at home. That was her favourite fruit. He was grabbing a plastic bag out of the steel bin, and he looked so familiar. His eyes looked Chinese, but he wasn’t Chinese at all. I kept acting like I had never seen him in my life, but the whole thing bothered me. So I bumped into him. I just didn’t mean to do it so painfully.
“Excuse me?” the man glared at me.
“Oh I’m so sorry”, I said acting like the whole thing was an accident.
“Was it my fault?” he had a quiet English accent.
“No it was all mine, I am sorry again, but by the way are you from England?” I asked him. It was a stupid question but I just had to find some stuff out about this strange man I had seen before.
“Yes, I currently live there”, he said brushing some dust off his shirt and pants.
“I am just here trying to visit this one girl”, he said with his English voice getting higher.
“Oh, your girlfriend?” I asked him. He looked like he was in his low 30’s. But he would have said “my wife” if he was married.
“No I haven’t met her yet!” I looked at him differently. I squinted then rethought this thing over again.
“What if he is looking for me!” I asked my self.
“It’s confusing, I know. But she is in my dreams. And it is always placed here, in Lawton, Oklahoma”, he told me. And I immediately dropped the bag of oranges.
“That is exactly where my dream is placed”, I thought to myself. This is him for sure.
“And she looks familiar to you”, he told me. He started observing me and getting closer. I stepped back 1 step. I was starting to freak out.
“Are you okay?” he asked me. I know I didn’t seem okay but I was.
“Yes, but I have to tell you something”. I answered his question pretty quickly.
“What is it?” he looked deep into my big brown eyes. He had light green eyes that shined so bright.
“My dreams sound just like yours, but I am here looking for a man. And he happens to look exactly like you”, I said quietly.
“We have to meet up some time”, the man told me. I nodded then we shook hands.
“I’m Elizabeth Renner, but you can call me Eliza”, I told him. He smiled and his mouth came open. His teeth were as white as snow.
“And I am Holland Hernie, and you can just call me Holland”, He laughed then let go of my hand.
“We can meet up at my place tomorrow afternoon if you’d like”, I told him. It felt weird just letting a stranger be welcomed into my home, but he didn’t seem like a stranger to me. It felt like we had been friends since the sixth grade.
“Sure, I will need your address though”, he said and chuckled once more.
“Yeah, I live in a hotel right now with my daughter is that alright? She is four years old and definitely a well mannered sweet heart”, I told him. Trying to convince him my daughter was not a devil of any kind.

ENGLISH IS MY SECOND LANGUAGE. . . . can i get this published?

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A poem I wrote for a girl in a wheel chair…would love for you to read it?

6 Comments 22 March 2010

Beauty Within

Her beauty, sweet wine for my insatiable eyes
Rich smell of french roast lingering within melodies
Classical music illuminating dark caverns within my ears
Her hair was golden as honey thirsting for oats
Yet, her eyes, blue skies, confidence flew like sea gulls
Her teeth gleamed white like foam of an ocean spray
Skin, amber-toned like the table my pencil gently tapped
How can immense beauty embody such a degree of solitude
Justly contradicting what appears upon the deceiving surface
“What coffee is she drinking?” My beating hearts contrivance
Such beauty left me feeling weak-kneed like maple flan
Everybody wore clothing black as pupils of human eyes
But, she wore a light green sweater, like valleys of spring
Her laughter, cathedral bells, summoned the realization
“This Goddess need not understand degrading sympathy”
Suddenly, like slipping inspiration, she vanished into thin air
One would have never known, that she was in a wheel chair

I was sitting at the coffee shop TODAY and saw this girl that was in a wheel chair. I did not see the chair at first, I saw the woman sitting in the chair. She was soo beautiful, not only on the outside, but I personally believed on the inside as well. The way she carried herself, confidence and poise. =] Such great inspiration to write a poem!

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How is this poem i wrote? be honest !?

5 Comments 20 March 2010

LOVE

You cry and weep,
It seems like you will never make it through this pain,
Your curse the guy that did this to you and you never want to feel like this again,
You avoid any relationship that gets to serious,
You keep to yourself and miss outings with friends,
Your heart feels heavy and cold,
Nothing like it used too, warm and light
You think you will never love again,

Until one day you look up and see white gleaming teeth,
A guy you have never seen before is smiling at you,
You quickly remind yourself that you hurt but can’t find the courage to step away,
He introduces himself and you hesitate,
Something feels different you think as you reply to him,
He flashes that great, perfect smile again and you are reminded of what you mother told you when you were younger:

“You will get hurt many times in your life by boys, but you mussent let that bring you down. There are many fish in the sea and you will go through many of them, but there is a guy out there for you. You just have to stay strong, be patient, and find him. ”

You then look into his eyes, take a deep breath and walk into a new place: love.

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read some of the various poems i wrote, do you like them??

1 Comment 12 March 2010

title:unknown
you kicked me wen i was down
keep me sad wen i have a frown
make me mad wen i was glad
but then surpriseingly
You tamed the beast in me
you happened to unleashed the key
you hoisted me above the earth
and brung about my rebirth.
now you need to clense your soul
told me you fell inside the hole
i rescued you and you never helped
you only gave me 1 thing
and that was the best thing i could want.
you tamed the beast inside of me
you unleashed the key
you hoisted me above the earth and
last but not least,
you brung about my rebirth!

title: so lovely
so lovely
in the late of night
i wander around lookin at the sky
with my eyes staring at the stars above
wondering if this could be love
and I’ve
never felt like this before
and this lover i adore
tell me lord
is he the 1
i always thought maybe
i wasn’t meant 4 love
i always thought maybe
i was the only 1 to b alone
but then i found a man so kind
who’d hold me close
and hold me tight
swore to protect me
and drove away all my fright
is it love that im feelin?!
but there isn’t any other reason
y my heart could feel this way
every night and every day
oh lord please help me.
oh lord please tell me!
is he the man for me?!
lord can u see
if he’s just the guy 4 me
so lovely

title: dont forget
i really thought it was real,
Any way we could feel.
Whether we were friends or not,
Did it matter or not?
And so now you leave with the best of me,
But don’t you think that you’ve gotten free.
Ill be back. Dont forget.
And you trail away, dont have to stay,
But sad as it is to your dismay
Ill be back. Dont forget.
Now its all lies,
It took me by surprise,
And now i think you forgot,
Oh how you forgot.
u think i believe that?.
have u forgotten our memories?
cuz i remember right u broke my heart
ur just twistin’ up the story
just twistin’ up the story

title: forbidden love
i seem so close to you
but in realality im still so distant
and i cant bring you back
its all the truth
the way i feel
all the pain of being away from you
the hatred in every heart-beat
the love in every thought
our forbidden love will never be real
its all just a dream
that should come to life
to hear your voice one last time
to hold your hand just one more chance
thats all i need
to create a memory
that will never be forgotten
or left in the dust
as our flame can rekindle
and soften into a softening glow
its our forbidden love
that can never be shown

title:heart shredder
i can see you over there
you stare right back at me
i would like to meet that guy
who cant take his eyes off me
well now i get my chance,
hes sees me coming near
he stands up and greets me
as if thats where im supposed to be
we talked and we laughed
we joked and we hugged
he asked me to dinner one week from then
i went there that weekend
but guess who hes with
well certainly not you and it was not me
i beelined him and asked how dare he
he was a cheater and a liar
he was a plain dirty theif
he had stolen my heart
and shattered it into bits
he had stolen my pride
and shredded it up
i was just there
an orniment standing
i was frozen in anger
anguish and saddness
maybe one week later
the guilt had sunk in
he gave me a call
and said how much of a fool he had been
well i didnt take him back because
he was a liar and a cheater
he was a heart shredder

soul mate?
i stare at you
you stare at me
all that i see
are beautiful blue eyes looking back at me
brown hair very short
white teeth that shine in the candle light
you look at me
freckles and all
my brownish hazel green eyes
i cant look away
neither can you
we have our moment
then move on
was it love at first sight?
or did only 1 of us feel
as if weve known forever
that you would be the one for me
and i would love you
and you would care about me
we shared a coke
and we shared a cake
we looked at pictures
are you my soul mate?
could you be my soul mate?
would you be my soul mate?
wanna be my soul mate?????

do you like it? its all true and its about a boy i like!
im 12, so is this good for my age???
i dont really like the first one all that much

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do you like these poems i wrote?? im 12 is it good for my age??

4 Comments 12 March 2010

you dont have to read them all but heres a few poems. . .
im 12 so is it good for my age?? forbidden love is my fave. .
please put wat the title was then put wat you want to say about that one.

title:unknown
you kicked me wen i was down
keep me sad wen i have a frown
make me mad wen i was glad
but then surpriseingly
You tamed the beast in me
you happened to unleashed the key
you hoisted me above the earth
and brung about my rebirth.
now you need to clense your soul
told me you fell inside the hole
i rescued you and you never helped
you only gave me one thing
and that was the best thing i could want.
you tamed the beast inside of me
you unleashed the key
you hoisted me above the earth and
last but not least,
you brung about my rebirth!

title: so lovely
so lovely
in the late of night
i wander around lookin at the sky
with my eyes staring at the stars above
wondering if this could be love
and I’ve
never felt like this before
and this lover i adore
tell me lord
is he the one
i always thought maybe
i wasn’t meant for love
i always thought maybe
i was the only one to b alone
but then i found a man so kind
who’d hold me close
and hold me tight
swore to protect me
and drove away all my fright
is it love that im feelin?!
but there isn’t any other reason
y my heart could feel this way
every night and every day
oh lord please help me.
oh lord please tell me!
is he the man for me?!
lord can u see
if he’s just the guy for me
so lovely

title: dont forget
i really thought it was real,
Any way we could feel.
Whether we were friends or not,
Did it matter or not?
And so now you leave with the best of me,
But don’t you think that you’ve gotten free.
Ill be back. Dont forget.
And you trail away, dont have to stay,
But sad as it is to your dismay
Ill be back. Dont forget.
Now its all lies,
It took me by surprise,
And now i think you forgot,
Oh how you forgot.
u think i believe that?.
have u forgotten our memories?
cuz i remember right u broke my heart
ur just twistin’ up the story
just twistin’ up the story

title:heart shredder
i can see you over there
you stare right back at me
i would like to meet that guy
who cant take his eyes off me
well now i get my chance,
hes sees me coming near
he stands up and greets me
as if thats where im supposed to be
we talked and we laughed
we joked and we hugged
he asked me to dinner one week from then
i went there that weekend
but guess who hes with
well certainly not you and it was not me
i beelined him and asked how dare he
he was a cheater and a liar
he was a plain dirty theif
he had stolen my heart
and shattered it into bits
he had stolen my pride
and shredded it up
i was just there
an orniment standing
i was frozen in anger
anguish and saddness
maybe one week later
the guilt had sunk in
he gave me a call
and said how much of a fool he had been
well i didnt take him back because
he was a liar and a cheater
he was a heart shredder

soul mate?
i stare at you
you stare at me
all that i see
are beautiful blue eyes looking back at me
brown hair very short
white teeth that shine in the candle light
you look at me
freckles and all
my brownish hazel green eyes
i cant look away
neither can you
we have our moment
then move on
was it love at first sight?
or did only 1 of us feel
as if weve known forever
that you would be the one for me
and i would love you
and you would care about me
we shared a coke
and we shared a cake
we looked at pictures
are you my soul mate?
could you be my soul mate?
would you be my soul mate?
wanna be my soul mate?????

be myself. .
people say to be yourself
to say what you want
and listen to what you hear
help who you can
and get revenge on people you fear
one day i met a man
he acted as himself till one comment shredded it all
he said
men in the fire
women in the rain
girls in the water
boys in the flame
i told him to be himself
but he is to blame
for all the hurt
my crying and pain
i wanted a man
who was claimed in flames
i tried to get close
but i got burned

title: forbidden love
i seem so close to you
but in realality im still so distant
and i cant bring you back
its all the truth
the way i feel
all the pain of being away from you
the hatred in every heart-beat
the love in every thought
our forbidden love will never be real
its all just a dream
that should come to life
to hear your voice one last time
to hold your hand just one more chance
thats all i need
to create a memory
that will never be forgotten
or left in the dust
as our flame can rekindle
and soften into a softening glow
its our forbidden love
that can never be shown

title:no more friendship
i thought it was true
through and through
you let me down
i tried to impress
but you just dreesed for success
i needed this
and you knew
but you said nothing
and thought i didnt know?
i found it out
all on my own
im not a spy
but i can tell when someone will lie
i hope your happy
because as i sit here and cry
you have what i want
and wont share it all the glory
you are heartless
cold blooded feend
i dont need to lie
to get what i want
but you have crossed the line
our friendship is over




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